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رواية: كود السيادة (عصر السيرفر الوطني) الفصل الأول: مراسم الانهيار بدأت الرواية في ليلة شتوية من عام 2030. كانت كوريا مغطاة بصمت إلكتروني مهيب. في "الفندق الأفخم"، وقف الرئيس "بارك" (المؤسس) أمام المسؤول الرفيع. سلم "بارك" القرص المشفر، ولأول مرة في التاريخ، تحولت الشاشات للرمادي. صرخ المسؤول: "بدأ مهرجان السيادة!". في تلك اللحظة، تحول الشعب من مواطنين إلى صائدي جوائز. انطلقت "هاي-تك" و"بلو-سكاي" في حرب تشفير شعواء، وانتهت الليلة بفوز "بارك" بصعوبة، ليدشن أول عشر سنوات من "الترقية الاجتماعية"، حيث نام الفقراء في أكواخهم واستيقظوا في ناطحات سحاب "هاي-تك". الفصل الثاني: خديعة "سيد الغدرة" بعد عقد من الزمن، جاء دور الرئيس "لي". كان المهرجان في ذروته، وتحالف "لي" مع أربع شركات ناشئة. في ممر المجد، وبينما كان الحلفاء يحتفلون بالوصول لنسبة 70%، أطلق "لي" فيروس "الافتراس". في ثانية واحدة، ابتلع حصصهم ووصل لـ 75.01%. مشهد "لي" وهو يمشي في الممر الزجاجي بينما شركاؤه يصرخون خلف الزجاج في "ممر الانكسار" أصبح أيقونة الرواية. كان "لي" أول من أقر قانون "التبعية الرقمية"، حيث لا يفتح هاتف الخصم إلا بمديح الرئيس. الفصل الثالث: عهد "بيتزا السيادة" جاءت المفاجأة من الطبقة الكادحة. "تشوي"، صاحب شركة لتوصيل الطعام، استغل ثغرة في برمجيات النقل خلال المهرجان. فاز "تشوي" بقلوب الجائعين والمهمشين. في حفل التنصيب، وقع القسم على علبة بيتزا. كان عهده الأكثر طرافة؛ حيث سُميت الشوارع بأسماء الوجبات، وأصبح "قانون الهدية" هو "وجبة ملكية مجانية يوم الجمعة". لكن تحت غطاء البيتزا، كان "تشوي" يبني أقوى نظام مراقبة عبر "درونات التوصيل". الفصل الرجم: صمت الجبابرة الرئيس "جونغ"، رجل الحديد والصلب. فاز بمهرجان دموي تقنياً. في لحظة فوزه، اختار مواطنوه "قانون الصمت". ساد الهدوء في كوريا لدرجة أن صوت دقات السيرفر الوطني كان يُسمع في الشوارع. في هذا الفصل، نرى معاناة الخاسرين الذين كانوا يُغرمون مالياً بمجرد "العطس" بصوت عالٍ. "جونغ" حول الدولة إلى آلة صامتة تعمل بدقة الساعات السويسرية. الفصل الخامس: فلاتر السلطة الرئيسة "هان" حوّلت الحكم إلى "تلفزيون واقع". فازت عبر السيطرة على العقول والتريندات. في عهدها، كانت "الترقية الاجتماعية" تعتمد على عدد "اللايكات" التي يحصل عليها المواطن من السيرفر. الموقف المضحك لـ "أذني الأرنب" أثناء خطاب النصر لم يمنعها من أن تكون أقسى حاكمة؛ فقد كانت تحذف "وجود" المعارضين رقمياً بضغطة زر، وكأنهم لم يولدوا قط. الفصل السادس: العتمة والضياء الرئيس "أوه"، سيد الطاقة الخضراء. في مهرجانه، قطع الكهرباء عن نصف البلاد ليرغمهم على التصويت له. ليلة تنصيبه كانت ليلة "الشرارة الكهربائية" مع المسؤول الرفيع. في عهده، أصبح "النور" امتيازاً للفائزين فقط. كان أنصاره يضيئون بيوتهم لدرجة الشمس في منتصف الليل، بينما يعيش الخصوم على ضوء الشموع، في مشهد جسد الفوارق الطبقية بأقسى صورها. الفصل السابع: جنة الألعاب (الواقع الافتراضي) الرئيس "سونغ" لم يخرج من غرفته أبداً. حكم عبر "الأفاتار". في عهده، اختار الشعب قانون "الهروب للواقع الافتراضي". قضى الكوريون 10 سنوات وهم يرتدون نظارات الـ VR، يعملون ويأكلون في عالم وهمي جميل، بينما كانت أجسادهم الحقيقية في غرف ضيقة. كانت الفضيحة الكبرى عندما تعطل السيرفر وظهر الرئيس "سونغ" ببيجامته الكرتونية أمام الملايين. الفصل الثامن: حصن "كانغ" المنيع الرئيس "كانغ"، جنرال الأمن السيبراني. كان مهووساً بالاختراق. في يومه الأول، ألغى جميع كلمات السر القديمة وفرض كلمات سر من 50 رمزاً. الرواية تصف "عصر النسيان العظيم"، حيث نسي الناس حساباتهم البنكية. لكنه منح أنصاره "مفاتيح ذهبية" تفتح أي باب في الدولة، مما جعلهم "آلهة" يمشون بين البشر العاديين. الفصل التاسع: العودة للبداية (نهاية التسعين عاماً) الرئيسة "كيم"، آخر الحكام في دورتنا. فازت بشعار "الجمال الأزرق". في مراسم الممر، رمى أنصارها الزهور، لكن في نهاية الممر، تعطل "الباب الدوار" الشهير. علقت "كيم" مع الرئيس المهزوم "كانغ" في الدوامة. في تلك اللحظة، وأمام ضحكات الشعب، أدرك الجميع أن السيرفر الوطني أصبح "واعياً". لم يعد المهرجان مجرد لعبة بشرية، بل أصبح السيرفر هو من يختار الفائز بناءً على "كمية الضحك" التي يولدها المهرجان. الخاتمة: تنتهي الرواية بمشهد للمسؤول الرفيع وهو ينظر إلى الساعة الرملية الرقمية التي ستبدأ دورة الـ 90 عاماً الجديدة. ينظر للكاميرا ويقول: "السيادة ليست لمن يملك الكود، بل لمن يملك قلوب من يكتبونه." تظلم الشاشة، ويبدأ صوت ضحكة خافتة تخرج من السيرفر الوطني.

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This is a wild, satirical concept—very Jujutsu Kaisen meets true crime commentary. Here is the English translation, keeping the dramatic, "shonen-style" flair intact.
Comic Title: "Domain Expansion: Paradise Lost vs. Party Purgatory"
The Concept: The Battle of Infernal Domains
In an interdimensional plane of existence where "cursed energy" generated by vice and infamy takes physical form, the greatest transgressors do not fight with fists, but with the expansion of their psychic "Domains." Here, Jeffrey Epstein and Diddy clash to determine who is the true "Master of Modern Darkness," each projecting his own twisted vision of power and corruption.
The Plot
Act I: The Summoning of Domains
The story opens in a "Non-Place"—a floating arena amidst clouds made of broken TV screens and burnt banknotes. Jeffrey Epstein, possessing a cold and calculating aura, his snow-white hair reflecting moonlight even in the day, smiles sardonically. He has just activated his Domain Expansion: "The Temple of Secrets."
The environment transforms: the Non-Place vanishes, replaced by a spectral, lush version of his private island (Little Saint James). Skeletal palm trees stand against a violet twilight sky. A colonial villa, elegantly sinister, rises at the center. The air is thick with recorded whispers, the echo of contracts, and the distant thrum of a landing helicopter. On the island, instead of sand, there are fragments of shredded legal documents.
The "Sure-Hit" advantage of Epstein’s domain is that anyone who enters is immediately ensnared in a web of legal debt, non-disclosure agreements (NDAs), and implicit blackmail, manifesting as invisible, suffocating chains.
On the other side, Diddy—with an expression of brazen arrogance, wearing a fur coat that sparkles with strobe lights and sunglasses reflecting a million paparazzi—does not hesitate. With a defiant cry, he activates his Domain Expansion: "The Endless Party."
Epstein’s domain is torn asunder by an explosion of neon lights and deafening sound. The island partially fades, giving way to a futuristic, chaotic, and bottomless nightclub. Champagne bottles explode into clouds of sticky foam. Virtual dancers with distorted celebrity faces perform in loops. The air is saturated with the smell of sweat, expensive perfume, and a faint scent of "baby oil" that is anything but innocent.
The "Sure-Hit" advantage of Diddy’s domain is that anyone who enters is forced to dance incessantly, suffering a sensory bombardment that renders them unable to think clearly, while being slowly "anointed" and weakened by a shimmering oil that leaves them vulnerable to manipulation.
Act II: The Clash of Cursed Powers
The two "masters" face off at the intersection of their domains.
* Epstein manipulates his island: the trees transform into legal tentacles attempting to seize Diddy; the ocean waves are made of "dirty money" trying to drown him; and the villa’s screens project compromising videos intended to paralyze his reputation. His attacks are based on "Secret Information" which, when they land, reveal the opponent's weaknesses and past crimes.
* Diddy responds by evoking the "Eternal Celebration": subwoofers launch soundwaves that shatter the structures of Epstein’s island. Giant champagne bottles transform into explosive projectiles. The oil permeating his domain becomes a corrosive substance that dissolves Epstein’s legal documents. His attacks are based on "Distraction and Corruption," aimed at eroding the opponent's will and making them "lose control" of their facade.
During the fight, they exchange venomous barbs that, in this comedic context, sound like boasts of their own infamy:
Epstein: "You’re just a novice! I built an empire on omertà, not some block party!"
Diddy: "Old man! I reinvented the game! You were just an amateur with a checkbook! I have the charisma!"
Act III: The Collapse of Domains and the Supreme Revelation
As the two grow more enraged, their domains begin to merge into a grotesque mess: an island with built-in nightclubs, palm trees dancing to trap music, and legal contracts swirling like confetti.
At the climax of the clash, a third entity manifests. It is not a being, but a gargantuan "Eye of Public Opinion" that opens above them, surrounded by millions of smartphone screens. This eye does not judge; it simply observes, recording every single infamy.
The power of this "Eye" is so great that both domains—built on secrecy and distraction—begin to collapse. The Eye is not an attack, but a simple revelation. In that moment, Epstein and Diddy realize that the true "curse" is not their enemies, but the constant and inexorable surveillance of a world that, eventually, sees and judges everything.
The comic concludes with the two trapped in a "non-place" made of cell phone screens showing their own misdeeds. They realize their "battle for dominance" was in vain. Neither can truly win when their very existence is under the world's merciless spotlight.
Visual Style and Tone
* Tone: Black comedy, grotesque and surreal satire, with a touch of existential horror.
* Art Style: Highly detailed and dynamic, with a sharp contrast between the perverse elegance of Epstein’s domain and the gaudy excess of Diddy’s. The Domain Expansions should be visually spectacular and unsettling at the same time.
* Colors: A rich and vibrant palette with heavy light-and-shadow contrasts, turning almost psychedelic during the Domain Expansion phases.

[Manga Page 1 Prompt: The 3rd Rhythm - Flashback Intro]
Create a high-quality full-color manga page, Page 1. The page should be divided into 3 distinct panels with a clear narrative flow.

Overall Tone & Style: Gritty Seinen Manga, Urban Grunge aesthetic. Detailed line art, vibrant but slightly desaturated colors, sharp focus on character expressions and internal monologue.

Panel 1 (Top - Medium Shot):

Content: The protagonist (Ryo - 182cm, muscular build, stoic face) is sitting on his stock Honda Wave 110i motorcycle with a Line Man delivery bag, stopped at a city red light. He's wearing his black baggy oversized sweater, light blue baggy jeans, and a retro half-shell helmet (no visor), showing his messy hair and silver ear piercings.

Action/Expression: He looks straight ahead, calm and expressionless. The background shows blurred city traffic.

Dialogue/Text: None from the protagonist.

Panel 2 (Middle - Wide Shot, slightly above the protagonist's eye level):

Content: Shifts focus slightly to the sidewalk beside the protagonist's motorcycle. A small, innocent boy excitedly points at a passing military truck (or a prominent military poster), looking up at his mother with bright, hopeful eyes.

Dialogue/Text (Speech Bubble from boy): "Mom! I want to be a soldier when I grow up!"

Mood: Hopeful, innocent, a stark contrast to the protagonist's inner world.

Panel 3 (Bottom - Composite Panel, showing a split flashback):

Content: This panel depicts a dual flashback, a direct visual response to the boy's dream. The left side of the panel shows a dark, gritty flashback of the protagonist (younger, more intense) fiercely punching a heavy sandbag in a dimly lit boxing gym. Sweat is flying. The right side shows him wildly playing drums on a dimly lit, smoky stage, hair flailing, with extreme intensity, a drumstick possibly breaking.

Mood: Intense, raw, powerful, and slightly melancholic or regretful. The colors in this flashback should be darker, more muted, with strong contrast, emphasizing the lost passion or intensity compared to his current quiet life.

Dialogue/Text (Thought Bubble from protagonist): "A dream, huh..." (The text should appear slightly faded, emphasizing it's an internal thought).

Comic Title: The 5-Year Ping
Theme: A story of high latency, hidden processes, and a final successful connection.

Part 1: The Legacy Code (School Days)
Visual: A split screen. On the left, Class 11, the boy looking at her across a classroom. On the right, The Last Day of School, the boy holding a letter, standing next to her empty chair.

Caption: "The script was written years ago, but the environment was never stable enough to hit 'Run'."

Dialogue (Boy's thoughts): “I waited for the perfect moment... but the perfect moment was a ghost.”

Part 2: The Debugging Phase (College Years)
Visual: Panels showing the chaos of 1st and 2nd year.

Panel A: The crowded college bus with "Talkative Friends" as blurred background noise.

Panel B (The Dare): The boy on the phone, sweating, asking her for "crush advice" while his friends laugh in the background.

Panel C (The Fake Photo): The boy showing her a photo of a random girl on his phone. The girl looks interested, but the boy’s heart is shown as a "broken link" icon.

Caption: "Sometimes, to protect the system, you have to run a decoy."

Part 3: The 3rd Year Transition (The Near Miss)
Theme: The broken logic of a missed opportunity.

Visual 1: The golden hour light hitting the college main gate. The crowd of students is thinning out. The boy catches up to the girl just as she’s about to exit.

Dialogue: * Boy: "Are you heading home right now?"

Girl (turning with a smile): "Yeah, just leaving. Are you coming along?"

Visual 2: A close-up of the boy’s face—a mix of conflict and regret. In the background, he sees his teammates or the work he has to finish, realizing he can't walk with her today.

Dialogue:

Boy: "I... I have to finish some work before I head out. I can’t join you today. You go ahead."

Girl: "Oh, okay! Don't work too hard. See you!"

Visual 3: A wide shot of the boy standing completely still by the gate as her figure shrinks into the distance. The long shadow of the college gate stretches toward him.

Dialogue (The Internal Monologue):

Boy (whispering): "Go home safely..."

Caption: "A request was sent, but the path was blocked by circumstance. Status: 404 - Opportunity Not Found."

Part 4: The Execution (The Night Call)
Visual: A beautiful night scene. On one side of the page, the boy is walking under a single golden streetlight, phone to his ear. On the other side, the girl is tucked in her room, surrounded by books, smiling.

Dialogue (1.5 hours in): * Girl: "So... be honest. Do you even talk to that crush of yours anymore?"

Boy (Shaking, close-up on his face): "Actually... I'm talking to her right this second."

Part 5: The "Loading" State
Visual: A full-page spread. The girl’s face is a mix of shock and a deep, rising blush. Behind her, a faint, glowing "Loading... 99%" bar appears.

Dialogue:

Girl: "I... I can't process this much data at once."

Boy: "I waited five years for the server to respond. I can wait a few more days for you."

Final Visual: The boy looking up at the moon in the mountains (foreshadowing your Himachal trip).

Closing Caption: "The connection is finally established. Status: Happy."

Creative Elements to Include:
Color Palette: Use cool blues and greys for the "missed" years, and shift into warm oranges and pinks for the phone call scene.

The Symbol: Use the flower you mentioned (the one that bloomed 3 years ago) as a recurring symbol in the corners of the pages.

The "God" Motif: In the background of the college scenes, you could have a small, subtle "halo" over the boy whenever she’s looking at him, showing how she admires him.

young boy has to decide a career to follow when completes 16. Between Wizard, Knight, Hunter, Assassin, Monk, Healer, Necromancer or Crusader. He decides to be a Healer, but he is really overpowering.
On his journey he founds couple friends that helps him to create a guild and build a whole castle that needs to be protected against wars from others players

半分の君
Romaji: Hanbun no Kimi Meaning: “Half of You”
At Hoshizora Academy, the Compatibility Program forces second year students to live together like married couples — cooking, cleaning, studying, sharing a dorm unit, and being graded on emotional sync. High scores mean scholarships. Low scores mean repeating the year. The program is infamous for creating bonds that feel too real and exposing feelings students try to hide.
Ignatius Arimura enters the year hoping to stay invisible. He’s quiet, introverted, and still carrying the ache of a breakup he never healed from. Aoi Kisaragi was his first love — the girl who made him feel alive, and the girl who walked away from him without ever explaining why. Aoi hides her guilt behind her bright smile, convincing herself she’s moved on to Ren. Ignatius tells himself he likes Mina because it’s easier than admitting he still aches for Aoi.
When the pairing announcement arrives, Aoi silently begs for Ren. Ignatius silently hopes for Mina. Both pray they won’t be paired with each other. But fate is cruel. Their names appear together with a compatibility score of 12%, the lowest in the program. The room goes silent. Aoi’s smile cracks. Ignatius’s heart sinks. Moving into the same dorm feels like reopening a wound neither of them survived.
Their first days together are a disaster. Aoi’s loud music, Ignatius’s quiet routines, her clutter, his need for order — everything clashes. Their first evaluation ends in failure. But when Ignatius freezes during a public speaking assignment, Aoi steps in without hesitation, her voice steady, her hand brushing his as she takes over. For a moment, it feels like the version of them that used to exist. Their score rises to 18%, and Ignatius realizes with a painful twist that he never stopped caring.
Seeing Mina and Ren working together so naturally only deepens the ache. Aoi watches Ren laugh with Mina in a way he never laughed with her. Ignatius watches Mina shine beside Ren and wonders if he ever had a chance. Both feel jealousy they refuse to acknowledge. That night, Aoi cries quietly in the bathroom, and Ignatius hears her through the door. He stands there, hand hovering over the handle, but he doesn’t know if he’s allowed to comfort her anymore.
They eventually agree to a truce and create a “Compatibility Strategy Plan.” Cooking together leads to soft laughter. Communication drills turn into arguments that somehow end with them smiling. Late night study sessions blur into moments where they forget they’re supposed to be exes. They fall asleep on opposite ends of the couch, but each night they wake up a little closer. Their score jumps to 41%. Aoi wakes one morning with Ignatius’s jacket draped over her shoulders. She doesn’t ask why. He doesn’t tell her.
And then comes the chapter that changes everything.
One night, after a long study session, Aoi falls asleep at the table, her head resting on her arms. Ignatius tries to wake her, but she mumbles something soft and exhausted, and he can’t bring himself to shake her. He sits beside her, meaning to stay only a moment. But he’s tired too. He rests his head on his folded arms, inches from hers. The room is warm. The silence is gentle. Without meaning to, they drift off together.
When they wake, the sun is rising. Aoi’s head is resting on Ignatius’s shoulder. His hand is loosely holding hers. Their breaths are slow and in sync, like they’ve been sleeping together for years. For a long moment, neither moves. Neither speaks. The world feels fragile, like one wrong word could shatter it. Aoi’s cheeks turn pink. Ignatius’s heart races. They pull away slowly, reluctantly, as if their bodies haven’t caught up to their minds. Their score jumps to 52% the next day, and the teachers quietly note that their emotional sync spiked overnight.
Aoi begins noticing Ignatius again — the way he concentrates, the way he softens when he’s comfortable, the way he still remembers her favorite snacks. Ignatius begins noticing Aoi’s hidden fears — her loneliness behind her popularity, her pressure to be perfect, the way she tries so hard not to disappoint anyone. They move around each other like a married couple who never learned how to stop caring. They share toothbrush cups, laundry baskets, late night ramen, sleepy mornings, and quiet moments that feel too intimate for two people who claim they’re over each other.
During the festival test, their booth becomes the most popular attraction. Aoi turns down a confession from another boy, her voice trembling. Ignatius gets flustered when Mina compliments him, and Aoi notices the way he blushes. Their score jumps to 63%. That night, Aoi quietly asks him if he ever hated her after the breakup. Ignatius can’t answer. He can’t lie. The silence between them is thick with everything they never said.
Rumors spread that pairs might be reassigned. Aoi panics at the thought of losing her chance with Ren. Ignatius panics at the thought of losing Mina. But beneath those fears is something heavier: neither of them wants to be separated from each other. Aoi cries alone on the balcony, and Ignatius silently places a blanket over her shoulders. She doesn’t turn around, but she leans into the warmth. They stand there together, the distance between them shrinking in ways neither of them can deny.
A storm knocks out the power one night, leaving them in darkness with no cameras, no expectations, no pretending. They talk honestly for the first time in months. Aoi admits she’s tired of being the strong one. Ignatius admits he’s tired of being the quiet one. They sit close, closer than they have since before the breakup, sharing warmth in the dark. Aoi falls asleep with her head on his shoulder again. Ignatius doesn’t move. Their emotional sync test the next morning hits 92%, the highest in the program.
As Ren and Mina grow closer, Aoi and Ignatius realize their old crushes were fantasies — safe illusions they clung to because they were afraid of the real thing. The real connection is the one they’ve rebuilt: messy, painful, warm, and real. They act like a married couple — cooking together, arguing, laughing, sharing space, sharing silence — but they’re not lovers. Not yet. They’re something in between, something fragile and terrifying and impossible to name.
When the reassignment list is posted, Aoi’s hands shake and K Ignatius’s heart pounds. They scan the list, terrified. Their names remain together. Not because of luck. Not because of the system. But because they earned it. Aoi turns to him, eyes shining with something fragile and hopeful, and whispers, “Ignatius … can we try again?” He takes her hand gently, like she might break, and says, “Yeah. This time… let’s not run.”
They’re not lovers. Not yet. But they’re closer than they’ve ever been — a pair who lives like a married couple, fights like rivals, and holds each other like home.

O antigo Samuel mas ele se libertou para se vingar

An Guy in the first photo visits his dad in the second photo in jail and The Guy in the first photo said "Dad how have you been?" And his dad said "I'm good son, you?" The Guy said "I'm good dad."

📖 CRÔNICAS DOS REINOS ENTRELAÇADOS
Volume 1 — Capítulo 1: O Céu Quebrado
20 páginas
🌓 PÁGINAS 1–2 (Splash Dupla)
Arte:
O céu literalmente rachando. Uma fissura colossal corta as nuvens.
Três cores irradiam da fenda: verde, laranja, violeta.
Silhuetas quase invisíveis nas nuvens:
A Árvore-Mãe
O Coração de Ferro
Uma torre distante em Nocturne
Narração:
“Toda era termina da mesma forma.
Primeiro… o céu se parte.”
🌓 PÁGINA 3
Quadros fragmentados, como vidro quebrado.
Floresta queimando.
Engrenagens esmagando corpos.
Mãos esqueléticas emergindo do chão.
Sem texto.
🌓 PÁGINA 4
Close no protagonista correndo em um vazio branco.
Uma voz ecoa:
“Você viu.”
🌓 PÁGINA 5
Ele para. O chão se transforma em raízes negras.
Outra voz, metálica:
“Você criou.”
🌓 PÁGINA 6
Sussurro grave:
“Você libertou.”
Três sombras o cercam.
🌓 PÁGINA 7
Ele acorda bruscamente.
Respiração pesada. Suor.
Quarto simples. Madrugada.
Silêncio pesado.
🌓 PÁGINA 8
Ele percebe algo na mão.
Um fragmento cristalino, pulsando nas três cores.
Pequeno. Antigo.
Ele não sabe de onde veio.
🌓 PÁGINA 9
Ele tenta largar o fragmento.
Não consegue.
Por um segundo, o quarto escurece.
🌓 PÁGINA 10
Corte externo.
A vila dorme.
Mas o céu pisca brevemente com as três cores.
Ninguém parece notar.
🌓 PÁGINA 11
Manhã.
Mercado simples.
Pessoas comentam:
“Os animais ficaram agitados ontem.”
“Senti um peso estranho no ar.”
O protagonista observa em silêncio.
🌓 PÁGINA 12
Um velho viajante encara o protagonista fixamente.
Ele aponta para o fragmento.
“Você também viu?”
🌓 PÁGINA 13
Close no velho.
“A Eclipse das Almas não é mito.”
Ele menciona três reinos:
Eldoria
Ferronis
Nocturne
🌓 PÁGINA 14
O protagonista pergunta:
“O que é isso?”
O velho responde:
“É o começo… ou o erro.”
🌓 PÁGINA 15
O fragmento esquenta.
O velho se afasta, assustado.
🌓 PÁGINA 16
O protagonista vê por um segundo:
A Árvore-Mãe chorando seiva negra.
Pisca.
Volta ao normal.
🌓 PÁGINA 17
Visão rápida:
O Coração de Ferro abrindo um “olho” mecânico.
Pisca.
Desaparece.
🌓 PÁGINA 18
Visão final:
Um selo rachando em Nocturne.
Algo respira atrás dele.
🌓 PÁGINA 19
O fragmento se eleva levemente no ar.
Forma um símbolo antigo.
Pessoas ao redor não veem.
Só ele vê.
🌓 PÁGINA 20 (Splash Final)
O céu acima da vila racha por um segundo.
Muito sutil.
Mas real.
Narração final:
“O destino não escolhe heróis.
Ele escolhe pontos de ruptura.”
Preto.
🎭 Função do Capítulo
Introduzir o mistério.
Conectar protagonista aos três reinos.
Estabelecer que algo já foi iniciado.
Criar sensação de inevitabilidade.
Nada foi explicado completamente.
E isso é intencional.
Mistério bem feito é tensão sustentada.

Style:
Colored, mature realistic manga.
Natural tones, cinematic lighting. No over-romantic effects.

Layout: 4 panels.

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Panel 1 (Top – wide highway shot)

White Kia Sorento driving from Utena to Vilnius.
Late afternoon / early evening light.

Caption:

He drove to see me.

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Panel 2 (Small insert panel)

Minimal map: Utena → Vilnius.

Small caption:

Distance was just a number.

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Panel 3 (Wide interior – Akropolis shopping mall, Vilnius)

Crowded shopping mall atmosphere.
They see each other for the first time.
Slight pause. Subtle nervous tension.

Small text in the corner:

November 29
Akropolis shopping mall, Vilnius

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Panel 4 (Closer shot)

Eye contact.
Soft expressions.
No physical contact yet.

Caption:

First “hi” in person.

Style:
Colored, mature realistic manga.
Night atmosphere. Intimate, cinematic lighting.

Panel 1

Still inside the white Kia Sorento.
Quiet moment. Engine off. Night outside.

Dialogue (him):

“Would you like to be my girlfriend?”

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Panel 2 (Close-up on you)

Soft smile. Warm lighting.

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Panel 3

You answer yes (subtle nod or smile).

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Panel 4 (Exterior night shot)

White Kia Sorento from outside.
Silhouettes inside.
Streetlight glow.

Caption:

That’s when it became real.

Style:
Colored, mature realistic manga.
Night atmosphere. Intimate, cinematic lighting.

Mood:
Soft tension → release.

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Panel 1 (Wide, inside the car at night)

Parked car. Dark outside.
Soft street light coming through the window.
They’re sitting close but not touching yet.

Small caption:

Later… he came to see me again.

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Panel 2 (Closer shot)

Inside the car.
Serious eye contact.
Hands resting close but not touching.

Dialogue (him):

“Can I kiss you?”

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Panel 3 (No text)

The kiss.
Soft, slow, not dramatic.
Warm light from outside hitting their faces.

No caption. Let the image breathe.

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Panel 4 (Quiet moment after)

Foreheads almost touching.
Calm. Slight smiles.

Small caption (optional):

And everything changed

Ten thousand years after the Great Heaven War, the Dao has changed—and so has the world.
Sects rule nations, flying swords fill regulated skies, and Heavenly Trials descend the moment a cultivator understands too much. In this late-stage cultivation era, power is institutionalized, ambition is monitored, and even righteousness is a political stance rather than a cosmic truth.
Born into an ancient sword clan that chose adaptation over isolation, a young cultivator enters a second-tier righteous sect where talent is refined and the greatest disciples are sent upward to a Tier One power. But in a world where the Dao is endless and Heaven corrects imbalance without mercy, insight is more dangerous than strength.
The path to immortality is uncertain.
The Dao does not care about good or evil.
And Heaven is always watching.

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