
Manga Story
The neon sign above the trailer buzzed with the irritable hum of a dying insect. It read Ground support, thought the 'U' in ground was flickering out, Leaving the company to announce itself as Grond Support. It fit the aesthetic of the surrounding yard, which was a graveyard of rust excavators, Coils of orange conduit and piles of gravel that looked like forgotten burial mounds. Alex Barry stood at the Chain-link gate, the dust of three state lines coating his black cowboy boots. He was twenty-one, but the shadows under his eyes belonged to a man twice his age. He ran a hand through his short, cropped black hair, wincing as his shirt sleeve rode up. The ink on his forearm, a jagged tribal design he'd gotten in a basement parlor in New Mexico. Hidden again as he yanked the fabric down. He wasn't dealing today, He wasn't running packages. He was trying to vanish and the best place to disappear was beneath the earth. He pushed open the door to the office trailer. The air conditioning hit him like a physical blow, smelling of stale coffee and toner. “We aren’t buying whatever your selling, kid.” a voice rasped from behind a desk that looked more like a barricade of paperwork. Shane, the owner sat there like a toad on a lily pad. Squeezed into a polo shirt so tight and pristine white that it looked like it had been painted onto his soft, round torso. He didn't look up from his spreadsheet, his pen tapping a frantic rhythm. “I'm not selling,” Alex said his voice rough from days of silence. “I'm looking for work. Sign out front says you need laborers.” Shane finally looked up his eyes narrowing as they swept over Alex. He took in the dust, the nervous energy the way Alex stood with his weight on his back foot, ready to bolt. “I need laborers, Not liabilities. You got a rap sheet? You look like you got a rap sheet. I don't pay for insurance risks.” Alex clenched his jaw. “I work hard. I don't ask questions. That's my resume.” Shane waved his hand. “Get lost,” Returning to his papers. “Go peddle your drama somewhere else. This is a respectable establishment. Alex turned to leave, his hand gripping the doorknob. It was the same old story. The world saw the grim on him and assumed he was trash. He was about to step back out into the scorching heat when the light in the doorway was suddenly eclipsed. A mountain of a man blocked the exit. This was steel At forty-four, he was a wall of muscle and scar tissue, wearing biker boots that clunked heavily against the cheap linoleum. He had to duck to enter the trailer, his presence immediately sucking the oxygen out of the room. He smelled of diesel and wet earth. Steel looked down at Alex. It wasn't a glare, It was an inspection. He looked at Alex's face, then down to the dusty cowboy boots. “Nice boots,” Steel rumbled. His voice sounded like gravel tumbling inside a cement mixer. Alex didn't flinch “They walk fine.” Steel smirked, a terrifying expression that somehow reached his eyes, He looked past Alex to the man at the desk. “Hire him, Shane.” Shane sputtered, his face turning a shade of indignity pink. “Steel, look at him! Hes a stray. Probably steal the copper wire first chance he gets.” Steel steps closer to the desk. “Kid wears boots like that, he ain't running from work,” Steel said just as another figure steps inside. If steel was a mountain, Mathew was the sapling growing on the cliff edge. The Nineteen Year old squeezed past Steel. Carrying a hydraulic pump over his shoulder with effortless, wiry strength. Long blond hair flowed out from under a hardhat that had been modified with a wide brim, making it like a plastic Stetson. “Morning, Shane! Morning, Steel!” Mathew chirped





![ADEGAN 1 — EKSTERIOR, HALAMAN KOSONG — SIANG
[Shot wide]
Sebuah halaman beton kosong. Langit cerah. Angin kecil menggulung satu daun kering lewat frame. Tidak ada siapa-siapa.
Suara: Angin sepoi, langkah kaki kecil di kejauhan.
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ADEGAN 2 — EKSTERIOR, SAMA — LANJUTAN
[Shot medium dari samping]
Cewek masuk frame dari kiri. Rambut berantakan, baju lusuh, ekspresi capek berat. Menyeret kursi kayu dengan satu tangan.
Suara: Gesekan kaki kursi di beton. Sreeet... sreeet...
Dia berhenti di tengah frame. Taruh kursi dengan hati-hati. Mengelap keringat. Duduk. Wajahnya berubah dari capek jadi senyum damai.
Dia menutup mata. Menghirup napas panjang. Puas.
Suara: Desah napas lega.
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ADEGAN 3 — EKSTERIOR, SAMA — LANJUTAN
[Shot wide]
Dari sisi kanan frame, Cowok muncul. Berjalan tanpa suara. Postur lurus kaku. Ekspresi benar-benar datar, mata setengah tertutup.
Dia berhenti tepat di samping kursi, berdiri menghadap depan. Tidak melihat si Cewek. Tidak melihat kursi. Hanya... ada.
Suara: Hening. Angin.
Cewek membuka satu mata. Melirik ke atas ke arah Cowok.
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ADEGAN 4 — INTERAKSI PERTAMA
[Shot medium, framing keduanya]
Cewek menunjuk dirinya sendiri, lalu menunjuk kursi. "Ini aku. Kursi."
Cowok melirik dengan mata super lambat. Dari bola mata bawah, naik sedikit. Melihat Cewek. Melihat kursi. Kembali melihat lurus ke depan. Tidak bereaksi.
Cewek berdiri. Gestur mempersilakan duduk dengan dua tangan. Wajah ramah.
Cowok menggeleng kecil. Sekali. Datar.
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ADEGAN 5 — LOOP TAWAR-MENAWAR
[Shot close-up bergantian, tempo makin cepat]
Cewek menawarkan kursi — gestur lebih besar.
Cowok menolak — geleng makin tipis.
Cut ke Cewek: menawarkan dengan mata melotot.
Cut ke Cowok: geleng dengan mata masih setengah tutup.
Cut ke Cewek: menawarkan sambil melompat kecil.
Cut ke Cowok: geleng sambil memejamkan mata.
Speed ramp: Sekarang bergantian super cepat. Gestur tawaran makin absurd — Cewek menunjuk kursi, tepuk kursi, gosok-gosok kursi, peluk kursi, angkat kursi ke arah Cowok. Cowok tetap menggeleng datar di setiap cut.
Suara: Whoosh whoosh whoosh makin cepat. Lalu tiba-tiba...
HENTI TOTAL.
Suara: Record scratch. Hening.
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ADEGAN 6 — LEDAKAN
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Cewek diam membeku. Senyumnya patah. Wajahnya berubah jadi gelap, bayangan menutupi mata.
Dia mengangkat kursi tinggi-tinggi di atas kepala dengan dua tangan. Pose seperti mau banting.
Mulutnya terbuka (seolah teriak, tapi tanpa suara).
LEMPAR KERAS. Kursi keluar frame kanan.
Suara: BRAAAK... creak... creak... (suara kursi jatuh berdebum, lalu goyang-goyang di luar frame, akhirnya diam)
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ADEGAN 7 — HENING PASCA BADAI
[Shot medium, dua karakter berdiri]
Keduanya berdiri. Tanpa kursi. Saling berhadapan dari jarak dua meter.
Cowok menatap Cewek. Cewek menatap Cowok. Nafas Cewek masih naik turun karena emosi.
Cowok... masih datar. Tidak terpengaruh sama sekali.
Angin lewat lagi. Daun kering yang sama dari Adegan 1 lewat lagi.
Suara: Angin sepoi.
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ADEGAN 8 — PUNCHLINE PERTAMA
[Shot close-up ke tangan Cowok]
Tangan Cowok masuk ke saku celana. Gerakan super lambat.
Klik... (bunyi logam kecil)
Tangannya keluar. Memegang sesuatu yang terlipat. Kecil. Persegi panjang.
Dia letakkan di tanah.
Klik... klik... klik... Dibukanya dengan tiga gerakan terpisah dan lambat.
Sekarang terlihat: kursi lipat kecil. Sangat kecil. Hanya cukup untuk pantatnya sendiri.
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ADEGAN 9 — DUDUK
[Shot medium dari depan]
Cowok duduk. Pelan. Punggung lurus. Tangan di paha. Lutut naik karena kursi terlalu pendek. Tapi dia duduk dengan postur sempurna.
Dia menutup mata. Menghembuskan napas dari hidung kecil. Wajahnya tetap datar, tapi ada sedikit sudut bibir naik. Puas versinya sendiri.
Cewek melihat semua ini dari sisi kiri frame. Mulutnya menganga. Mata melebar. Seluruh tubuhnya membeku.
Suara: Cricket sound. Jangkrik.
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ADEGAN 10 — TWIST AKHIR
[Shot wide]
Cewek berjalan mendekat. Bukan ke kursi lipat. Bukan ke depan Cowok. Tapi ke... samping-belakang Cowok.
Cowok masih duduk dengan mata terpejam.
Cewek berdiri tepat di belakangnya. Mengukur jarak. Membidik.
Dia jongkok sebentar, lalu...
DUDUK DI ATAS KEPALA COWOK.
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ADEGAN 11 — FREEZE FINAL
[Shot medium dari depan, framing sempurna]
Cowok duduk di kursi lipat kecil. Postur tetap lurus. Mata masih terpejam. Tapi sekarang muncul satu tetes keringat besar di pelipisnya.
Di atas kepalanya, Cewek duduk bersila. Senyum puas kembali ke wajahnya. Mata tertutup. Damai. Seperti di Adegan 2.
Keduanya diam.
Kamera hold 3 detik.
Kartu judul muncul:
"KURSI"
Suara: Pop kecil saat judul muncul. Lalu sunyi.
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