
Manga Story
The scene begins with a boy named Krop leaving a job application place, slightly sad because he was rejected for a job again. He returns to his apartment and begins thinking about his career future. He opens the fridge but finds nothing to eat. He goes to a store to buy some food, and on his way back, he hears a girl screaming in a dark alley. He quickly enters to see and starts hearing a girl crying, and when he gets close to her, her facial features change and she tells him, "You fool," releasing a strange energy on his stomach that throws him backward. When he gets up and looks at her, he finds her flickering like a TV screen. He says, "Who are you, for heaven’s sake?" She says, "You shouldn’t see me like this, but who cares? I can simply delete myself from your memory, and in this way, we will defeat you." The hero thinks to himself, "Wait, delete myself? Memory? Delete memory?? Do you want to erase my memory of the time I saw you, but I must remember what I’ve seen now? This is dangerous. And why is she flickering like a TV? Is she not real?" He looks at the pen in his pocket and says, "I found it," pulls it out quickly, looks at her flickering body, and starts writing on his hand. He writes: "Strange flickering." She notices and says, "What!" and makes a hand snap that makes him lose consciousness for a moment and lower his head. The girl says, "I understand, he wants to write notes about me on his hand," and suddenly hears someone approaching, so she says, "Who cares? It won’t help him," and leaves, dropping an accessory with a strange symbol. Krop regains consciousness on the ground. A man comes to help him and asks, "What happened?" He replies, "I don’t know." Then he says, "Why am I here, and why do I feel pain?" He stands up and reads what is written on his hand. He is surprised and says, "This is my handwriting, but when and why?" He starts trying to understand and finds that symbol on the ground, then says, "It seems something happened here." Krop returns to his apartment. He starts eating his dinner while thinking, "What does ‘strange flickering’ mean? Does that mean I saw something strange, and why can’t I remember it?" He holds that symbol and says, "And what is this also?" "Ah, this seems strange." He gets up, goes to make his coffee, and watches TV. When he turns it on, there’s flickering on the screen. He says, "Ah, again, this flickering… Flickering!!" By the way, if I was the one who wrote it, the closest word to ‘flickering’ I remember is ‘TV flicker.’ He starts staring at the flickering, then turns off the TV and goes to sleep. The next day, he wakes up to a ringing phone. He answers: "Krop here." He says, "Yes." The caller says, "We reviewed your file that you submitted for the job here last week." He says, "Wait, who are you?" The caller replies, "I am the manager of Cardo Cafe, and you have been accepted. You need to be here before 8 AM to start work." Krop responds happily, "Finally, thank you so much! I’m coming right away." He gets up quickly, puts on his clothes, grabs a piece of bread, and rushes to the cafe. He enters and finds the waiter asking, "What do you want?" He replies, "I’m here to work." The waiter says, "Oh, you’re the new recruit? The manager told me about you. My name is Sarodem, call me Saro, and my colleague here is Mira. The manager is Grim. I hope you enjoy your time with us." Then the manager comes and says to Krop, "Come here, I’ll give you your work uniform, and you’ll start cleaning now." Krop removes his clothes, puts on the work uniform, and gives his clothes to Saro to hide. Krop starts working with them, cleaning tables and floors. Saro brings drinks and coffee, and Mira is the waitress taking orders and serving them. After a long day of work, their shift ends. Krop tells Saro to give him back his clothes. Saro goes to the storage room, picks up Krop’s clothes, and as soon as he carries them, that symbol falls. Saro examines it for a moment and says, "What is this thing? It’s strange," then returns it and gives the clothes back to Krop. Krop changes back into his clothes and returns to his apartment, only to find the door open, even though he made sure to lock it with the key he keeps under the carpet outside. He thinks he forgot to lock it. When he enters, he finds the place messy, as if someone entered. He starts searching around the apartment for anything missing and finds that nothing was stolen. He begins thinking about why a thief would come to him, even though his apartment isn’t luxurious





![ADEGAN 1 — EKSTERIOR, HALAMAN KOSONG — SIANG
[Shot wide]
Sebuah halaman beton kosong. Langit cerah. Angin kecil menggulung satu daun kering lewat frame. Tidak ada siapa-siapa.
Suara: Angin sepoi, langkah kaki kecil di kejauhan.
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ADEGAN 2 — EKSTERIOR, SAMA — LANJUTAN
[Shot medium dari samping]
Cewek masuk frame dari kiri. Rambut berantakan, baju lusuh, ekspresi capek berat. Menyeret kursi kayu dengan satu tangan.
Suara: Gesekan kaki kursi di beton. Sreeet... sreeet...
Dia berhenti di tengah frame. Taruh kursi dengan hati-hati. Mengelap keringat. Duduk. Wajahnya berubah dari capek jadi senyum damai.
Dia menutup mata. Menghirup napas panjang. Puas.
Suara: Desah napas lega.
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ADEGAN 3 — EKSTERIOR, SAMA — LANJUTAN
[Shot wide]
Dari sisi kanan frame, Cowok muncul. Berjalan tanpa suara. Postur lurus kaku. Ekspresi benar-benar datar, mata setengah tertutup.
Dia berhenti tepat di samping kursi, berdiri menghadap depan. Tidak melihat si Cewek. Tidak melihat kursi. Hanya... ada.
Suara: Hening. Angin.
Cewek membuka satu mata. Melirik ke atas ke arah Cowok.
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ADEGAN 4 — INTERAKSI PERTAMA
[Shot medium, framing keduanya]
Cewek menunjuk dirinya sendiri, lalu menunjuk kursi. "Ini aku. Kursi."
Cowok melirik dengan mata super lambat. Dari bola mata bawah, naik sedikit. Melihat Cewek. Melihat kursi. Kembali melihat lurus ke depan. Tidak bereaksi.
Cewek berdiri. Gestur mempersilakan duduk dengan dua tangan. Wajah ramah.
Cowok menggeleng kecil. Sekali. Datar.
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ADEGAN 5 — LOOP TAWAR-MENAWAR
[Shot close-up bergantian, tempo makin cepat]
Cewek menawarkan kursi — gestur lebih besar.
Cowok menolak — geleng makin tipis.
Cut ke Cewek: menawarkan dengan mata melotot.
Cut ke Cowok: geleng dengan mata masih setengah tutup.
Cut ke Cewek: menawarkan sambil melompat kecil.
Cut ke Cowok: geleng sambil memejamkan mata.
Speed ramp: Sekarang bergantian super cepat. Gestur tawaran makin absurd — Cewek menunjuk kursi, tepuk kursi, gosok-gosok kursi, peluk kursi, angkat kursi ke arah Cowok. Cowok tetap menggeleng datar di setiap cut.
Suara: Whoosh whoosh whoosh makin cepat. Lalu tiba-tiba...
HENTI TOTAL.
Suara: Record scratch. Hening.
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ADEGAN 6 — LEDAKAN
[Shot wide]
Cewek diam membeku. Senyumnya patah. Wajahnya berubah jadi gelap, bayangan menutupi mata.
Dia mengangkat kursi tinggi-tinggi di atas kepala dengan dua tangan. Pose seperti mau banting.
Mulutnya terbuka (seolah teriak, tapi tanpa suara).
LEMPAR KERAS. Kursi keluar frame kanan.
Suara: BRAAAK... creak... creak... (suara kursi jatuh berdebum, lalu goyang-goyang di luar frame, akhirnya diam)
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ADEGAN 7 — HENING PASCA BADAI
[Shot medium, dua karakter berdiri]
Keduanya berdiri. Tanpa kursi. Saling berhadapan dari jarak dua meter.
Cowok menatap Cewek. Cewek menatap Cowok. Nafas Cewek masih naik turun karena emosi.
Cowok... masih datar. Tidak terpengaruh sama sekali.
Angin lewat lagi. Daun kering yang sama dari Adegan 1 lewat lagi.
Suara: Angin sepoi.
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ADEGAN 8 — PUNCHLINE PERTAMA
[Shot close-up ke tangan Cowok]
Tangan Cowok masuk ke saku celana. Gerakan super lambat.
Klik... (bunyi logam kecil)
Tangannya keluar. Memegang sesuatu yang terlipat. Kecil. Persegi panjang.
Dia letakkan di tanah.
Klik... klik... klik... Dibukanya dengan tiga gerakan terpisah dan lambat.
Sekarang terlihat: kursi lipat kecil. Sangat kecil. Hanya cukup untuk pantatnya sendiri.
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ADEGAN 9 — DUDUK
[Shot medium dari depan]
Cowok duduk. Pelan. Punggung lurus. Tangan di paha. Lutut naik karena kursi terlalu pendek. Tapi dia duduk dengan postur sempurna.
Dia menutup mata. Menghembuskan napas dari hidung kecil. Wajahnya tetap datar, tapi ada sedikit sudut bibir naik. Puas versinya sendiri.
Cewek melihat semua ini dari sisi kiri frame. Mulutnya menganga. Mata melebar. Seluruh tubuhnya membeku.
Suara: Cricket sound. Jangkrik.
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ADEGAN 10 — TWIST AKHIR
[Shot wide]
Cewek berjalan mendekat. Bukan ke kursi lipat. Bukan ke depan Cowok. Tapi ke... samping-belakang Cowok.
Cowok masih duduk dengan mata terpejam.
Cewek berdiri tepat di belakangnya. Mengukur jarak. Membidik.
Dia jongkok sebentar, lalu...
DUDUK DI ATAS KEPALA COWOK.
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ADEGAN 11 — FREEZE FINAL
[Shot medium dari depan, framing sempurna]
Cowok duduk di kursi lipat kecil. Postur tetap lurus. Mata masih terpejam. Tapi sekarang muncul satu tetes keringat besar di pelipisnya.
Di atas kepalanya, Cewek duduk bersila. Senyum puas kembali ke wajahnya. Mata tertutup. Damai. Seperti di Adegan 2.
Keduanya diam.
Kamera hold 3 detik.
Kartu judul muncul:
"KURSI"
Suara: Pop kecil saat judul muncul. Lalu sunyi.
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