
Manga Story
The Girl Who Could See Feelings In a world that looks completely normal, a quiet girl lives with a strange ability—she can see human emotions as physical creatures attached to people. Anger burns like restless fire beasts, sadness clings as heavy shadow figures, and happiness flutters like soft glowing birds. Because of this, she keeps her distance from everyone, overwhelmed by the chaos of emotions around her. One day, she notices a boy walking through the crowd with nothing attached to him—no creature, no emotion, just emptiness. Drawn by curiosity and unease, she starts observing him, only to realize that his emotions are not gone but deeply suppressed, locked away somewhere inside him. As she slowly gets closer, cracks begin to form, and the hidden emotions start emerging violently, threatening to consume him. Now she must decide whether to step back like always or stay and face the storm she can clearly see but he cannot. 🕰️ You Owe the Clock A girl struggling with regret and missed chances discovers that she can ask for more time—extra moments to fix mistakes, redo conversations, and change outcomes. At first, it feels like a miracle, as everything begins to go her way. But soon, she starts noticing strange things: clocks around her begin to glitch, shadows stretch unnaturally, and certain moments feel… stolen. She eventually meets a boy who seems detached from time itself, someone who knows exactly what she’s experiencing. He reveals the truth—time is never given freely; it is borrowed from their own future. Every extra second she gains now is a piece of her life being taken away later. As the world around them begins to distort and their existence slowly weakens, they realize they are both trapped in a system where time itself demands repayment. The more they try to fix their lives, the closer they move toward losing them entirely. 🧠 The Space Between Us Two strangers begin experiencing the same strange phenomenon: at random moments, reality around them shifts into a surreal, silent dimension where the world feels incomplete, like a broken version of itself. In this space, they meet each other long before they ever meet in real life. At first, they think it’s just a dream, but the consistency of these encounters proves otherwise. As their connection deepens, they begin to depend on this shared world—one sees it as an escape from reality, while the other fears it is slowly replacing it. When they finally meet in the real world, things don’t align the way they should. One of them feels real, grounded, and present… while the other seems slightly out of place, like they belong more to the other dimension. As the boundaries between worlds begin to blur, the terrifying possibility emerges: what if only one of them truly exists, and the other is just a creation of the space between? 🪞 The Reflection That Stayed A girl living a quiet, emotionally restrained life begins to notice small changes in her reflection—it lingers a second too long, moves slightly out of sync, and sometimes watches her instead of copying her. At first, she ignores it, assuming it’s just her imagination, but the reflection grows bolder. One day, it doesn’t follow her movement at all. Soon after, she starts seeing it outside the mirror, walking in places she hasn’t been, interacting with people she avoids. Slowly, people around her begin responding more to this version of her than to her real self. The reflection is everything she is not—confident, expressive, and unafraid. As her own presence begins to feel weaker and less noticeable, she realizes that the reflection isn’t just copying her life—it is replacing her. The truth becomes clear: the reflection is the version of herself she buried long ago, now breaking free and taking the life she was too afraid to live. 🌑 The Boy Without Light In a world where every person is accompanied by a shadow that subtly moves and reacts on its own, a girl begins to notice something unusual—her own shadow is behaving differently. It lags behind, stretches unnaturally, and sometimes moves without her. One day, it leads her toward a boy who has no shadow at all. His presence feels incomplete, almost unnatural, as if something essential is missing. As she continues to encounter him, shadows around the city begin to disappear, leaving people strangely hollow and disconnected. Her own shadow grows more independent, almost protective, as if trying to warn her. Eventually, she uncovers the hidden truth: shadows are not just reflections—they are fragments of identity, slowly being taken by something unseen. The boy without a shadow may not be a victim… but the cause. Now she must decide whether to trust him or follow the silent warnings of the only part of herself that sees the truth—her shadow.





![ADEGAN 1 — EKSTERIOR, HALAMAN KOSONG — SIANG
[Shot wide]
Sebuah halaman beton kosong. Langit cerah. Angin kecil menggulung satu daun kering lewat frame. Tidak ada siapa-siapa.
Suara: Angin sepoi, langkah kaki kecil di kejauhan.
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ADEGAN 2 — EKSTERIOR, SAMA — LANJUTAN
[Shot medium dari samping]
Cewek masuk frame dari kiri. Rambut berantakan, baju lusuh, ekspresi capek berat. Menyeret kursi kayu dengan satu tangan.
Suara: Gesekan kaki kursi di beton. Sreeet... sreeet...
Dia berhenti di tengah frame. Taruh kursi dengan hati-hati. Mengelap keringat. Duduk. Wajahnya berubah dari capek jadi senyum damai.
Dia menutup mata. Menghirup napas panjang. Puas.
Suara: Desah napas lega.
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ADEGAN 3 — EKSTERIOR, SAMA — LANJUTAN
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Dari sisi kanan frame, Cowok muncul. Berjalan tanpa suara. Postur lurus kaku. Ekspresi benar-benar datar, mata setengah tertutup.
Dia berhenti tepat di samping kursi, berdiri menghadap depan. Tidak melihat si Cewek. Tidak melihat kursi. Hanya... ada.
Suara: Hening. Angin.
Cewek membuka satu mata. Melirik ke atas ke arah Cowok.
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ADEGAN 4 — INTERAKSI PERTAMA
[Shot medium, framing keduanya]
Cewek menunjuk dirinya sendiri, lalu menunjuk kursi. "Ini aku. Kursi."
Cowok melirik dengan mata super lambat. Dari bola mata bawah, naik sedikit. Melihat Cewek. Melihat kursi. Kembali melihat lurus ke depan. Tidak bereaksi.
Cewek berdiri. Gestur mempersilakan duduk dengan dua tangan. Wajah ramah.
Cowok menggeleng kecil. Sekali. Datar.
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ADEGAN 5 — LOOP TAWAR-MENAWAR
[Shot close-up bergantian, tempo makin cepat]
Cewek menawarkan kursi — gestur lebih besar.
Cowok menolak — geleng makin tipis.
Cut ke Cewek: menawarkan dengan mata melotot.
Cut ke Cowok: geleng dengan mata masih setengah tutup.
Cut ke Cewek: menawarkan sambil melompat kecil.
Cut ke Cowok: geleng sambil memejamkan mata.
Speed ramp: Sekarang bergantian super cepat. Gestur tawaran makin absurd — Cewek menunjuk kursi, tepuk kursi, gosok-gosok kursi, peluk kursi, angkat kursi ke arah Cowok. Cowok tetap menggeleng datar di setiap cut.
Suara: Whoosh whoosh whoosh makin cepat. Lalu tiba-tiba...
HENTI TOTAL.
Suara: Record scratch. Hening.
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ADEGAN 6 — LEDAKAN
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Cewek diam membeku. Senyumnya patah. Wajahnya berubah jadi gelap, bayangan menutupi mata.
Dia mengangkat kursi tinggi-tinggi di atas kepala dengan dua tangan. Pose seperti mau banting.
Mulutnya terbuka (seolah teriak, tapi tanpa suara).
LEMPAR KERAS. Kursi keluar frame kanan.
Suara: BRAAAK... creak... creak... (suara kursi jatuh berdebum, lalu goyang-goyang di luar frame, akhirnya diam)
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ADEGAN 7 — HENING PASCA BADAI
[Shot medium, dua karakter berdiri]
Keduanya berdiri. Tanpa kursi. Saling berhadapan dari jarak dua meter.
Cowok menatap Cewek. Cewek menatap Cowok. Nafas Cewek masih naik turun karena emosi.
Cowok... masih datar. Tidak terpengaruh sama sekali.
Angin lewat lagi. Daun kering yang sama dari Adegan 1 lewat lagi.
Suara: Angin sepoi.
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ADEGAN 8 — PUNCHLINE PERTAMA
[Shot close-up ke tangan Cowok]
Tangan Cowok masuk ke saku celana. Gerakan super lambat.
Klik... (bunyi logam kecil)
Tangannya keluar. Memegang sesuatu yang terlipat. Kecil. Persegi panjang.
Dia letakkan di tanah.
Klik... klik... klik... Dibukanya dengan tiga gerakan terpisah dan lambat.
Sekarang terlihat: kursi lipat kecil. Sangat kecil. Hanya cukup untuk pantatnya sendiri.
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ADEGAN 9 — DUDUK
[Shot medium dari depan]
Cowok duduk. Pelan. Punggung lurus. Tangan di paha. Lutut naik karena kursi terlalu pendek. Tapi dia duduk dengan postur sempurna.
Dia menutup mata. Menghembuskan napas dari hidung kecil. Wajahnya tetap datar, tapi ada sedikit sudut bibir naik. Puas versinya sendiri.
Cewek melihat semua ini dari sisi kiri frame. Mulutnya menganga. Mata melebar. Seluruh tubuhnya membeku.
Suara: Cricket sound. Jangkrik.
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ADEGAN 10 — TWIST AKHIR
[Shot wide]
Cewek berjalan mendekat. Bukan ke kursi lipat. Bukan ke depan Cowok. Tapi ke... samping-belakang Cowok.
Cowok masih duduk dengan mata terpejam.
Cewek berdiri tepat di belakangnya. Mengukur jarak. Membidik.
Dia jongkok sebentar, lalu...
DUDUK DI ATAS KEPALA COWOK.
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ADEGAN 11 — FREEZE FINAL
[Shot medium dari depan, framing sempurna]
Cowok duduk di kursi lipat kecil. Postur tetap lurus. Mata masih terpejam. Tapi sekarang muncul satu tetes keringat besar di pelipisnya.
Di atas kepalanya, Cewek duduk bersila. Senyum puas kembali ke wajahnya. Mata tertutup. Damai. Seperti di Adegan 2.
Keduanya diam.
Kamera hold 3 detik.
Kartu judul muncul:
"KURSI"
Suara: Pop kecil saat judul muncul. Lalu sunyi.
FIN.](https://media.mangaai.com/c8988f36-016b-4e6a-b8f4-96cc9c693303.png)



































